Monday, June 16, 2008

(unpub. draft #1) just to pause this...

some moments are that overwhelmingly wonderful, intense, joyful, and everything in between...they tear out your soul and leave it bare on the hardwood floors of your reality...shrinking away from the touch of it...stretching out to fill the space and leave it warm...how did i get here so far from where i want to be...so close to where i am afraid to be...



i want you...everywhere...inside me...around me...within me...



just to pause this moment of incredible emotion...

cg

4 curious people say...:

Percy said...

an unpublished until now post..
I like it...
moments that " tear out your soul and leave it bare on the hardwood floors of your reality"

I have had a few of those..

you write good stuff cg.. you dp

curiousgirl said...

thanks...it was inspired by a song called "just to pause this" by amplifico...they have a version that is just her with the piano...

cg

thedateabledork said...

Yes, you definitely write well. I love this stuff - very powerful. Glad you finally published this one. : )

curiousgirl said...

@dork - thanks...i think i am going to start a second blog where i can just post things of this nature...i have a lot of things like this piled up that i could sort through...

cg